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E Inu 'Oe Ike Aha (I think I fixed it) |
finkdaddy Tiki Socialite
Joined: May 11, 2004 Posts: 2050 From: Wisconsin
| Posted: 2006-08-30 7:24 pm  Permalink
It took me a while, but I finally finished my first ukulele song. It's titled "E Inu 'Oe Ike Aha" which translates to "What Would You Like To Drink?" or so I hope.
It's recorded on my computer, so don't get your hopes up about the quality or anything, the middle is kind of blank because it needs a solo that I haven't written yet, and I've never claimed to be a singer. But here it is.
I should mention that there are a couple of TC drinks mentioned in the song: Woofmutt's Pink Wink, Kick_the_Reverb's Reverb Crash, and my own creation The Pearl of Wisdom. The rest are ones I'm sure you all know.
Mahalo!
(let me know if the link doesn't work)
*Edited to delete old link*
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Tikibrand Tiki Centralite
Joined: Aug 31, 2006 Posts: 11 From: Arlington, TX
| Posted: 2006-08-31 12:09 pm  Permalink
not too shabby amigo. throw in a little bit o'drums and maybe a tamborine, and you got yerself a hit record!
(these are just the thoughts of someone who claims he knows good music, the uke' sounds great on its own too)
kudos once again
 
 
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pablus Tiki Socialite
Joined: Jul 23, 2003 Posts: 2149 From: www.crazedmugs.com
| Posted: 2006-08-31 2:45 pm  Permalink
hey hey...
Like the song a lot.
Cool changes and a nifty demo and a good idea.
You're not too far.
I wasn't sure about the melody in the "Paradise..." section and right around there.
Sounded like I wanted to stay minor and you were going major.
The uke sounds right on. Good timing - sure tones.
Yeah, man.
Yeah.
 
 
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Chongolio Tiki Socialite
Joined: Oct 02, 2002 Posts: 2765 From: The Coast of Kauai
| Posted: 2006-08-31 6:40 pm  Permalink
That is way Finkin' cool Daddy! I agree add a back beat to bug out to and your going gold.
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TikiLaLe Tiki Socialite
Joined: Feb 09, 2006 Posts: 891 From: Largo, Floriduh
| Posted: 2006-09-02 8:49 pm  Permalink
Hey Finkdaddy
Nice sound, wondering if your available for my kids Bar Mitzhav?
 
 
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Kanekila Tiki Socialite
Joined: Aug 07, 2004 Posts: 185 From: Safety Harbor, FL
| Posted: 2006-09-06 12:27 pm  Permalink
Hey Finkdaddy -- dude, that sounds great!
I agree with Pablus in that the melodic definition is a bit unclear with how it jives up with the melody in those spots, but I think I hear where you're going with it.
I like the tune, braddah. Now, let's get it onto vinyl with some steel and bass!
T
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finkdaddy Tiki Socialite
Joined: May 11, 2004 Posts: 2050 From: Wisconsin
| Posted: 2006-09-06 2:57 pm  Permalink
Thanks everyone! I think I see what you mean about the melody. You're trying to say that the vocals and the uke don't quite jive in the "paradise" parts. I think you're right too. I'll tweek it a bit and post the results! I think that happened because I had the the words and melody written in my head months before I actually got the uke, so maybe I forced it a bit. And yes TikiLaLe, I do Bar Mitzvahs!
Much more to come. Mahalo!!
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Capt'n Skully Tiki Socialite
Joined: May 28, 2005 Posts: 404 From: The Lost Lagoon
| Posted: 2006-09-07 6:54 pm  Permalink
I dig it - I have to agree about the Paradise bits.. I think that melody should be spun off into your next hit tho!
Great work! More more more!!
 
 
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finkdaddy Tiki Socialite
Joined: May 11, 2004 Posts: 2050 From: Wisconsin
| Posted: 2006-09-12 4:50 pm  Permalink
Ok everyone, I think I fixed the paradise part. I was trying to record this with my 4 kids in the room, so quality is less than sublime, but I'm not trying to cut an album or anything here. Let me know what you think.
E Inu 'Oe Ike Aha
Mahalo!!
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hewey Tiki Socialite
Joined: Sep 14, 2004 Posts: 4270 From: Sydney, Australia
| Posted: 2006-09-14 04:58 am  Permalink
Thats pretty kool man
thats the first time Ive got a chance to listen to any of your stuff, not bad
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